It's BADASS! in general really...

So I started a piece for sga_flashfic's general criminal badass challenge...

I've got the prologue (Rodney slowly choking Carter to death while laughing manically, yo). I have the situation more of less worked out. And now I'm stuck. I've started writing from the SGC's point of view, but that won't allow me to show quite the levels of Atlantis' badassery. It's terribly annoying.

Maybe I should just heed Trickster's advice: By choosing one zing, you have to sacrifice a bit of the others. It's OK. There will be other sex scenes. (really that's applicable to fiction in general I think) 

Also, I totally need a Beta. Deadline = 6 October. *Whimper*